偷 Steal

[顏雪花Catherine Yen]

(Thirst, photo by wu, PoHan)

偷

一枝釣竿
恬恬伸入厝內的魚池
囝仔鬼鬼祟祟
看東看西
伊無看著
我佇窗內
看著伊

輕輕叩著玻璃窗
囝仔挽跤即走
留了釣竿
我看著一隻鳥鼠
看著一陣遛遛去的煙

釣竿
掛在鐵柵仔盪盪晃
無魚 無釣竿
的囝仔
人生的第一課
偷的代價

Steal

A fishing rod
Stretch into the fishing pond slightly
Sneaking the child
Look around furtively
He did not see
I was in the window
Seeing him

knocked on the window
Ran away the child
Leave a fishing rod
I saw a mouse
Run away like a rushing smoke

The fishing rod
Hung on the iron railing and swayed
Nor fish no fishing rod
The child
The first lesson in life
A cost of stealing

[胡長松]

好詩, 真甲意結尾, 位生活中發見真智慧.

[王立信]

有一工，彼兮囝仔提出勇氣翻頭閣轉來夯釣竿﹝予怹阿兄罵.釣竿怹阿兄的﹞，
囝仔穿插筆紥，佇門跤口停咧，深深吸一口氣，手指頭仔夯懸懸，一時間按抹落電鈴
臉色煞反紅.........。忽然間啪一聲，門自動拍開，內面兮人﹝自早佗將釣竿收好勢當等伊﹞
將釣竿交予囝仔。彼兮囝仔目珠無意無意接過來煞大聲吼出來越頭翻身緊走，走五分鐘久了後
臉色開始慢慢浮出笑容。

歹勢，因為受生動詩文吸引一時心色興回應，請莫見怪。

[顏雪花Catherine Yen]

真趣味，你差不多攏講對，彼兮囝仔是一間Pang(麵包)店頭家的後生，我認出伊，所以去買pang，順勢還伊釣竿，小代誌，但是愛hoo囝仔知影伊的行為毋對。 多謝續文，想像力真豐富。