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(Sunlit interior, by Carol Holsoe)

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你拍開向著花園的門
嘴笑目笑甲我叫
“喫飯啦!”
我看著你粉紅
笑甲真幸福的面
目晭內攏是愛意
像光向我飛來
溶作一團的甜蜜
懸懸掛佇紫藤花頂
親像輕輕晃的鞦韆

You opened the door toward the garden
Grinned to me and called
"Have the lunch!"
I looked at your pink
Smiling face in happiness
Eyes were full of love
Like the light flying to me
Dissolved a heap of sweetness
Dangling high on the Wisteria
Swayed gently like a swing

夯樓梯爬懸去拍開
你的頭殼蓋
我揣著思想
揣著正直
揣著世人欠缺正義的憤怒
揣著溫柔
揣著真實
我kah思想、正直、憤怒 、溫柔 、真實
貫做一條旆鍊
掛佇月娘的胸前
微微的光佇暗時閃熠

Take the stairs climbing to open
The skull
I search for the thoughts
The integrity
The world anger that lack of justice
The gentleness
The truth
I string the thoughts, integrity, anger, gentleness and truth
Into a necklace
Hanging on the chest of moon
Flashing the humble light in the night



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顏雪花Catherine Yen在1:49pm對2010 七月 29的評論
吳柏翰 1 天以前 的評論
I love them, especially the first. It's a piece of poem beaming of happiness and love, bringing the audience to a picture full of joyful lights and colours. The last two sentences were particularily beautiful, like "coda" in a piece of music. 看似不相關,其實極為重要。餘音繞梁,讓人意猶未盡。
顏雪花Catherine Yen在1:49pm對2010 七月 29的評論
If a poem can bring out several different senses, that would be fine. The major purpose is to lead a stanza or a passage attaining its conclusion, that's a real meaning of coda. Thanks for the comments.

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